Wednesday, January 28, 2015

1.28 Characterization of technologies + literacies

We started class by reviewing how to use the blog, making sure everyone had access to the Course readings, and commenting on using the homework to work on the major assignments for the course. Sounds like you are all getting on track, and from checking through your portfolio posts, this looks like are going to have lots of interesting stories to read.

"Pencils to Pixels"
We then spent some time talking about "From Pencils to Pixels, " Baron's essay on technologies + literacies.

First we talked a little about what Baron means by technology.  If technology means the use of tools, analytic/applied knowledge to DO something => then Baron uses the term technology to refer to the inventions/systems/ applied ideas we use to communicate.  

In a nutshell, Baron's main points are that:
1. new communication technologies are "accepted" in terms of a general pattern which has repeated itself over the course of the development of many communication technologies, from writing to the Internet;

2. and technology choices shape the processes and products in our communications.

You then worked in groups to sum up, Section by section, how Baron develops his argument.

Overview of group reports on Baron by sections.
Introduction: computers are the next new thing - but really it's just a new technology - and the same concept as writing with a pencil = just with pixels. New communication technologies go through predictable patterns - whether or not it catches on depends on accessibility, function and authentification.

Stages of literacy technology
limited accessiblity = high cost + lack of information how to use it
introduced to public => get used to familiar functions connected to earlier technologies=> evenutally prices go down
once a reaction spreads, new technology has to be accessible + trustworthy

Humanists & technologies  
writers are often looked at as individuals who are against technology = but communication technologies are central to humanist's work (talks about this through the example of the pencil)

Technology of writing
first writing technology was writing itself=>extended human development as a whole, but drawbacks were feared (weaken memory)
printing press, electric power, radio + television
development of writing itself demonstrates the paradigm (model) for the spread of writing technologies

What writing does differently
you don't know tonal
new technology has to prove itslef cues => allows languages to grow and change, ultimately affects how spoken language is used

Pencil as technology
pencil as example of patterns surrounding communication technologies=> were not designed for the purpose they eventually served

Thoreau + Telephone
same idea - people don't at first know how, where to use it = particular example of Baron's paradigm

Computers+ Conclusions
computers weren't for writing when they started out
asd evolution of technology expanded - so did fraud
became more impersonal
computer technologies brought their own set of authenticity problems

[You did a great job on this, groups!]


Characterization of literacy technologies
After discussing Baron's essay, we made a list of some of the different technologies you used for writing, and spent a little time characterizing their "features".  By features, we meant descriptions of how they work, feel, & interact with others as you use them.

We spent the most time talking about talking, pencil and paper writing, word processing, and writing on the web.

We talked about each of these in terms of how they connect you to your audience, what kind of a network they put you inconnection with and how interactive that network was, the level of anonymity, the ease of authenticating communications, the "modes" the communication technology allowed you to use (writing, images, sound, motion or any combination), how you interact with/produce text using this system (the interface = keyboard-screen, camera-screen, microphone -screen-speaker, keyboard-textpage, keyboard (small)screenpage, etc).  For each technology - the features are different.

At the conclusion of this discussion, you did some writing about your self by answering the following three questions:

Three questions
1. What technologies do you use/prefer to communicate with?
2. What features of the technologies influence your choices?
Features include:
  • relationship to audience (present, dispersed, unknown, etc); 
  • modes for representation (images, sounds, text, motion); 
  • distribution:  (immediate and with everyone - like participating on forums, slow and only with a particular audience - like snailmail; immediate with defined audience (but easy to copy/forward) - like email; intimate + immediate - like texting)
  • interactivity
  • level of anonymity
  • interface features
3. Which technologies do you use for what purposes?  Why? (these answers might connect to the features of the technologies).

Process narrative
During the last part of class, I introduced the process narrative (the assignment sheet is posted to the right) by asking you to do some writing to "document" your "habits" for brainstorming.  You did this documentation by writing down some observations about how you did the writing for the 3 questions above.  Using the prompts listed below, you noted whether you wrote in paragraphs, in a list, or in random comments; how (or whether) you "organized" your writing, whether (and why) you chose to "freewrite"; how the writing flowed; whether (and when) you stopped to proofread or re-organize, and so on. From your comments in class - it sounded like you were all writing down exactly the right kinds of observations - and they were very interesting!   It is always so amazing to me how we all think and write so differently!

Prompts for documenting your writing process.

Describe what you did the in-class writing for the literacy narrative assignment.

1. Did you make a list, do some freewriting or make some associations (or do any kind of brainstorming which used writing) before you began to write?  Describe.  If you didn't use writing, describe (as near as you can) what went on inside your head as you gathered ideas.

2. As you wrote, describe the flow of your writing.  Did you get stuck at any point?  What did you get stuck on?  What factors do you think contributed to you getting stuck?  How did you get "unstuck"?

3. What kind of editing/correcting did you engage in as you wrote?  Was it a disruption to the "flow" of your writing? Did some of your "edits" stop you from putting ideas on the page because they "weren't good enough" or because you werent sure about an idea or how to spell a word?  


After you did this "documentation" - we took a quick look at the process narrative assignment sheet, just so you would have an idea of the purpose for this assignment, as well as "the big picture" for what you will be doing.  If it felt a little overwhelming, that's OK, we will be coming back to the assignment sheet lots of times, so hopefully the idea will become more and more clear as we continue to work on it.

For next class  
Read:  We didn't get to the sample literacy narratives, so review them for next week.  We will be reading Sample Literacy Narratives 1, 2 & 4.  These are essays written for the same assignment you will be writing.  We will examine them both as "models" for how to write this assignment, and for practice thinking about how to revise/write a stronger assignment.

Also read Selections from Matthew McCools Writing Around the World:  Guide to Writing Across Cultures - posted at course readings.

Write:
1) Post the writing you did for the 3 questions on the Literacy narrative page. Title the post: 1.28Name_Technologies

2) Post the writing you did for the Prompts for documenting your writing process  to the Process narrative page.  Title the post/document: 1.28Name_Invention

3) Throughout the week, post 3-5 short observations about the way you write using different technologies.  These posts should note:
  • when/why you are writing, 
  • what technology you are using, 
  • the purpose of your writing, 
  • and HOW you write.  
The HOW might include a description of how much & how fluently you wrote, how you felt about writing, whether you got stuck/were interrupted, what strategies you used to accomplish your purposes; whether or not you were satisfied with the writing, etc.

4) Continue to think about your experiences with writing.  As they come to your mind, write 1-3 (depending how long and detailed they are) "stories" about experiences you had with writing.  An examples of what I mean by stories are short descriptive "scenes" like in Sample Literacy Narrative1 where the writer describes herself sitting in the library, realizing that she loved reading all the books that were there and that meant someone actually wanted to write them, or when she is shown her brother's map for the book he said he would write.  You don't have to know why the particular story you tell about yourself and writing is important - just go with your gut and put it out there.


Thanks for the great class today!  I will check in on your posts some time before next class, just to be in touch and see how you are doing.  Have a great week, and see you next Wednesday.





Wednesday, January 21, 2015

1.21 Overview of ENG 2020 and Literacy Narrative

NOTE:  I havesent the permissions for the 2020 Reading List.  If you can not access the readings at the link to the right, send me an email and I will see what I can do.

Today we mostly focused on introductions - to course content, to the course infrastructure, and to each other.

Attendance:  Your attendance is recorded in the sign-in book, on the desk at the front of the class.  Be sure to sign in every day when you come in.  I will help with reminders for the first couple of weeks - but it is your responsibility to sign in.

Syllabus & Calendar.  We went over the syllabus (up through the discussion of grades).  I did not cover the course practices or the general information about Kean.  The syllabus is regarded as a contract, so it is important for you to read these sections and make sure you understand and are willing to go along with them.  Also, I gave a general indication of the overall sequence of the course set forward on the calendar.  One more thing about the calendar.  Sometimes the way it is written confuses students so I am going to go over it here.  Below is entry for today.  The text in red is what we will do IN CLASS on the day beneath the date.  E.G. => today we did introductions, you looked at the LN assignment, created your portfolio, and did some writing for the LN assignment.

Posted next to Read and Writing homework is what I planned to assign for the assignmnets for next class (that is, it is the homework assigned on Jan 21, due on Jan 28).  These assignments are not always what you end up being assigned.  You need to check this blog for the ACTUAL assignment.

W Jan 21
Introductions: course site, syllabus + calendar
Journal prompt: who are you as a writer?
Presentation on Literacy narrative + paying attention to writing process
Journal prompt: your earliest experiences with writing
Create portfolio
Read:  literacy narrative samples, Dennis Baron, From Pencils to Pixels”  http://www.english.illinois.edu/-people-/faculty/debaron/essays/pencils.htm
Writing homework: observe your writing process for the literacy narrative paper - write your observations in your writing journal; describe where you write, other "parallel" activites (listening to music? - does it interrupt you?  how often? does it help you focus?  how?)

Portfolio.  You did a great job creating your portfolios.  I have a working link for a site for everyone in class (well done!)  The portfolio is where you will post most of your work for the course.  You will not be turning in any writing on paper for this course.   


Literacy narrative assignment.  We talked through the purpose, description, and criteria for the Literacy Narrative.   We spent some time talking about cultural discourses which shape or contribute to our relationship to writing, and we talked about discourse communities as the groups of people who share the cultural discourses which affect our assumptions, values, and beliefs about writing and just about everything else.  If you didn't get the definition of "discourse" and "discourse community" down from that introduction, that's OK => we will be defining/re-defining/talking about what cultural discourses are and how they works for the rest of the term.  Meanwhile, if you are interested, some places to read a little more, the Wikipedia entry for discourse community, and for refers to some of the major writing studies and linguistic scholars who write about discourse communities, and Matthew McCools Writing Around the World:  Guide to Writing Across Cultures, the homework reading assignment that you will be assigned on January 28  (though it doesn't mention discourse communities per se) refers to many of the ideas we were talking about today when we described how discourse communities could be identified by the way the talked, acted, their belief systems, even sometimes the way they dressed.

We pointed out that thinking about discourse and discourse communities is about 'belonging' - about "acting like/talking like" someone from a particular region ( New Yorkers, Midwesterners, Southerners), generation (teens, profession (musicians, hs teachers, athletes, etc), and so on.  It is important to be careful not to lapse into stereotyping - or simplistic thinking that assumes EVERYONE from a particular group is the same, still, it is useful to notice that different groups DO have different assumptions, values and beliefs which affect the way they relate to reading and writing.   

After we read through the assignment,  you did some writing to a series of "big categories - how you feel about writing" prompts.  I asked you to write about how you felt about:
  • writing for school, 
  • early experiences learning to write at school, 
  • early experiences writing with your family, 
  • experiences writing with friends when you were little, 
  • writing with friends (especially around middle school) - as you started to establish your own identity
  • writing for your self, and about 
  • writing for your work/vocation.  


I think that is approximately the order & focus of the prompts, more or less.   You posted this writing to the literacy narrative page of your portfolio - either pasted in to the page, or as an attachment.  Either way, you labeled it with the date and marked it as in-class or brainstorming writing.

For next class:
Read:  literacy narrative samples 1, 2 & 4 (posted at course library)

Write: Do some writing that will provide you with material to work with for your literacy narrative.  You can do this by writing to your choice of prompts listed on the first page of the assignment sheet, or you can expand on writing you did in class (where you wrote quick responses for the categories listed above).

Which ever approach you take, you should quickly (not worrying about complete sentences or making a completely coherent story) - with as many details as you can remember about the experience you are describing.  Length: about a page or two - enought to have some "examples" to work with in class.  Post the writing on the portfolio page for your literacy narrative, either by pasting it in, or attaching it.  If you have questions, let me know.

Again - this is NOT polished writing.  Do not waste time making it perfect.  You are looking for ideas/patterns/details that you have forgotten and you are using writing to help you remember and organize what you can remember about past experiences with writing.

Good class today!  Thank you for your patience with the technology glitches.


1.21 First day of class

This is the course blog.  It  is the place to check on and keep track of what we do in class.  It is also a "file cabinet" for documents (assignment sheets, readings, protocols, the syllabus and calendar) - and  a clearinghouse for links to useful sites.

As you can see - this blog takes up where my last ENG 2020 course left off.  There have been some revisions since the last time I thaught this course - but browsing back through posts will give you a feel for what we will do.

ENG 2020 is the introduction to the writing major, and it is standardized - which means that all sections of the course cover the same material.  

I'm looking forward to getting to know you, and to reading your writing!